December Nights

this is a good poem. i don't really have any bad vibes about this poem at all. except i just want to comment on the one line where you said ...

i LOVE it. it screams 'true poet' at me. i will look into your other works to see if you are as much a genius as i think you are. ...

i am so sorry this happened to you. i myself don't have a dad like this but two of my friends have a dad kind of like this. i feel ...

i have bugged so many people about this and you are no different, hands off the enter key!! so many lines i can't even count them i hate when you ...

i like your story it is very good. I'm not just saying that either. i like your vocabulary in it and the way you say that even though the smoke ...

glad to know i could help. this one is so good i love it, i started singing it myself. its such a good one, except for just one typo, in ...

Anger is orange. It smells like smoke, choking and dry. It tastes like hot coal, burning and bitter. It sounds like a sonic boom, loud and deafening. And it feels ...

this is very visual, and image making is very good for this kind of a poem. i love the ripping apart of clothes line, it really does express the rage ...

this poem is very intriguing. i like the way you are in prison bars, you can tell there is hostility. but the part where you say something i don't feel ...

To feel safe when he hugs me The smell of his jacket He looks downward at me and smiles To smile back To embrace and feel a warm feeling flow ...

Shiane: I couldn’t help but stumble through the door. I had already had something to drink on the way over. Crazy party nights, why did most people think they were ...

The words exchanged by you were played off as a sweet something that you would whisper into some one's ear, but something with much deeper meaning. With a reaction of ...

Most of us that live in the moment are lost, and it seems the only way to find yourself it to be done with it, for nobody who makes your ...

First I would just like to say LET GO OF THE ENTER KEY. sorry that bugs me a lot it is my poem peev. I think this is a very ...

I LOVE IT!!! I think this is a great poem, and yeah it could be used as a song too. Most of my works are made for songs, bat are ...